the outlines give it this weird sense of false thickness that make the shapes less defined (notably the hair) so i dunno still. if it's a matter of readability then i can adjust the color contrast and fix things up accordingly (i already gave his hand a darker shade to help make it more distinguishable, i just can't post it right now, i'm on mobile)
EDIT: here it is
revised outline version as well, i still don't really like it that much.
EDIT: here it is
revised outline version as well, i still don't really like it that much.