07-01-2015, 07:49 PM
Your Steven seems pretty stiff and tall! His arms are way too close to his body, it's almost as if he's in in the army or something. I think you could keep the brown for his hair color and add some darker colors to the lineart as well. the hue shifting makes him also look like it's kind of nighttime, so you might want to adjust the palette so it's more neutral color, but that's up to you if you're going for a certain aesthetic with your colors.