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The hair lacks dimension.

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On this reference sheet, Garnet's depiction (third from left) should provide a good example as to what you should do with the hair. In its current state, her hair resembles a piece of bread, and although the example shown does not portray the exact pose you are spriting, her hair should resemble a rounded off cuboid.

Anyhow, good job. Look forward to seeing what happens next with your sprites. Cute
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eight sprite-a-bit - by shrubbyfrog - 06-30-2015, 12:08 PM
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