eight sprite-a-bit

[shrubbyfrog]

What I think you should do about the hair is add an extra shade to the lower part, so it'll look rounder. Adding some more detailed shading to the clothes will give them more of a shape, and more contrast on the colors would help them stand out from each other.
Also, making her left arm more visible helps make her shape look better.


This is how it could look.

There's also a few jagged parts that should be fixed, and some things that should be rounded out as well. This can be a really great sprite if you fix it up.

I was actually stuck on the bangs and the crest trying to fix the hair on my own while I waited for some c+c. It was your edit and suggestions that pretty much allowed me to fix the hair ((and pretty much the entire sprite)) in a way I found pleasing and ... Convenient?? I don't have a good word for this uh....

Anyway, I added some contrast to pretty much the entire sprite ((and the gem because it was kind of hard to distinguish the colours from 100% view)). I added some shape to the clothes and fixed the hair.


((happy grape !!))

There's something abt the boots and pants that bother me a bit though ... They look a bit plastic-y to me?? I don't know how exactly how I'd fix that but the shading I did on the boots and pants look off, but that may just be me.