07-21-2015, 09:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-21-2015, 09:37 PM by Filler.
Edit Reason: Added a few things
)
In my opinion, there's too much of the darker shade from Wario's forearms that it makes it hard to tell the contrast from the colours of his shirt compared to his skin. I suggest you tone it down in a similar way like this.
![[Image: wah_by_fillerartist-d92abk6.png]](http://orig13.deviantart.net/6734/f/2015/202/3/7/wah_by_fillerartist-d92abk6.png)
This also removes the distraction of the muscles, which is a bit harsh. But still keeps them.
EDIT: I also suggest you to improve the contrast of movement on each frame via overlapping action, as the timing and movement is a bit too stiff, which results in it looking awkward and disjointed.
This also removes the distraction of the muscles, which is a bit harsh. But still keeps them.
EDIT: I also suggest you to improve the contrast of movement on each frame via overlapping action, as the timing and movement is a bit too stiff, which results in it looking awkward and disjointed.