(07-22-2015, 06:13 AM)Paladin Wrote: I really like the animation itself, it's got plenty of personality, and the only thing odd is how the girl's stomach kinda changes shape during it. I can see what you were going for, but the change is a bit sudden. I also don't really think the broken selout is doing the sprites any favors, so cleaning it up would probably make the sprite look more appealing.
Overall, I like the colourful style you've got, keep it up!
I actually just finished a slightly better version trying to clean up some stuff and make it just feel smoother.