Key's Thread for Showing Off My Art Things

[Kosheh]

It looks nice, but the character looks like she's got only one eye. A stard of hair that thich could'nt cover an eye that big entirely.

It's intentional. https://store.steampowered.com/app/38879..._702_7__13 

The character's drawn in a chibi SD style. When you have that little real estate to work with, you can do that, and it just works. When you make the character normal proportions, though, it...doesn't quite work out the same.

 

I see where you were trying to go with it though. What Quirby's trying to say is that if you're going to do that, you need to draw the strand of hair to compensate.

Like the fanart above, I'd suggest (if you decide to revisit it) trying to draw that strand of hair that's currently covering her eye to instead rest on her forehead, and then enlarge the next tuft of hair (which covers where her ear would be) so it rests over the eye and achieves the effect you're looking to go with with Alte.