[DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0

[Garamonde]

It's probably because of the fact that her thigh there is really bulbous, and the outlines of it intersect into the leg in front of it and the hand. This leaves no negative space and makes it more difficult to read. I would make the outer thigh less rounded and maybe see if you couldn't make her hold it out a bit more so there is a bit of negative space between it and the other body parts.

(Sorry if that doesn't make sense)