08-18-2015, 07:15 PM
long story short your sprite is wonky, let me grab the official art for ya
as you can see this style is really smooth and round in many places. one could break him apart in many curve chapes, such as this
And unfortunately that doesn't quite happen in your sprite - check out his body under the clothes!
A tip would be to make the likes for the body first, then add the clothes later. It will help in correct placement of the fabric. Also there's a 45º angle on his eyes instead of a smooth curve. You may want to avoid those in any wavy style such as these (or any modern cartoon tbh) because it's rather unnatural.
as you can see this style is really smooth and round in many places. one could break him apart in many curve chapes, such as this
And unfortunately that doesn't quite happen in your sprite - check out his body under the clothes!
A tip would be to make the likes for the body first, then add the clothes later. It will help in correct placement of the fabric. Also there's a 45º angle on his eyes instead of a smooth curve. You may want to avoid those in any wavy style such as these (or any modern cartoon tbh) because it's rather unnatural.