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Doing things that haven't been done in years (F&TSWD's pixels thread)
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long story short your sprite is wonky, let me grab the official art for ya

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as you can see this style is really smooth and round in many places. one could break him apart in many curve chapes, such as this

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And unfortunately that doesn't quite happen in your sprite - check out his body under the clothes!

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A tip would be to make the likes for the body first, then add the clothes later. It will help in correct placement of the fabric. Also there's a 45º angle on his eyes instead of a smooth curve. You may want to avoid those in any wavy style such as these (or any modern cartoon tbh) because it's rather unnatural.
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RE: Doing things that haven't been done in years (F&TSWD's pixels thread) - by Gors - 08-18-2015, 07:15 PM

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