Paper Mario help wanted

[Sketchasaurus]

Alright then, but I hope you don't completely change everything, such as altering the structure of the story or changing my lines too much.

This may be a bit blunt, but the harsh reality is this:
This kind of mentality is detrimental to any sort of creative process, especially when it comes to writing scripts. If anything is considered off-limits or "precious" then you automatically impede potential growth. It's one thing to have a creative vision, but that doesn't mean that the vision should be "it's exactly my way or nothing else." If you're having people lend their time and expertise, then you need to respect the changes they make and take them into serious consideration.

I should note that this isn't solely directed towards you personally; it's directed at that particular mentality. Having only one draft is foolish, and every line in a script is open to change. You're robbing yourself from the potential improvement you get by working with others.