I don't think I made this part clear, but the reason why I'll rewrite the first part of the script (as in the first two or so pages) is due to the fact that's all Kosheh has edited so far (at least from what I was able to see on his post). Obviously, there's more to the script that needs changing around, so I never said I'll only do just that and leave the rest as it is. If anything, I want my new take on the first script to pass the "Kosheh Seal of Approval" before I head out into other parts. Besides, if I was as lazy as you think I am, would I even be willing to make most (if not all) of the edits suggested throughout my project, let alone work on a massive undertaking like a Paper Mario fan series single-handedly at all? 
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