Paper Mario help wanted

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Besides, if I was as lazy as you think I am, would I even be willing to make most (if not all) of the edits suggested throughout my project, let alone work on a massive undertaking like a Paper Mario fan series single-handedly at all?

things can still get half-assed while making a project, especially by yourself. at certain points, one might feel lazy with one part and just half-ass the whole thing. of course, that wasnt the case here, but you see what im saying?

kosheh seal of approval? i get that kosheh is helping and all, but you should just look at what he generally changed for the first segment and just expand on that. examples include unwanted exposition, grammar errors, etc..

just try to be a bit more open about c+c. i skim by some of your threads sometimes and i get this vibe that there's an excuse for not changing anything. that may not be related to this case, but im just throwing that out just so you can be aware.