I just skimmed over your second bit of the script, Kosheh, and I'm actually pleased with the results. I probably won't use your exact edits (especially since I want to alter the Koopa Bros.' dialog to fit the personalities I described a bit ago), but expanding on what you did sounds good to me.
By the way, Recme, I don't think I show this well enough, but I actually do listen to and try practically all the critique I get. It's just that I always have this constant fear of not being able to apply the critique correctly or unwittingly make an exact copy of what the person has shown me (which is less likely to make me learn the proper material). Even when I do have anxieties about changing a certain thing, I still at least give it a good try to see if I'll get it right that time. Maybe my fears are where that vibe comes from?
By the way, Recme, I don't think I show this well enough, but I actually do listen to and try practically all the critique I get. It's just that I always have this constant fear of not being able to apply the critique correctly or unwittingly make an exact copy of what the person has shown me (which is less likely to make me learn the proper material). Even when I do have anxieties about changing a certain thing, I still at least give it a good try to see if I'll get it right that time. Maybe my fears are where that vibe comes from?
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