09-02-2015, 02:04 AM
You may want to make her pupils thinner in the side facing sprites so that her pupils still seem to be the same size in proportion to her eye whites.
The top-right sprite has strange looking arms and legs. I'm not sure where the legs are supposed to be coming from, which, take that how you will; that could be a problem in and of itself, but, to me, the legs just look like they shouldn't appear in that position from that angle. In the same sprite, the arms kind of look like they're at the wrong perspective. I can see what you were going for, which I think is having arms parallel to the ground, but, to convey that, I'd make the tips of the gloves more curved to match the perspective and pull her forearms back a little bit.
I have a problem with the broken outlines in certain places, but I'm pretty sure it's a personal thing, in my case.
These look pretty good so far, though. Keep it up!
The top-right sprite has strange looking arms and legs. I'm not sure where the legs are supposed to be coming from, which, take that how you will; that could be a problem in and of itself, but, to me, the legs just look like they shouldn't appear in that position from that angle. In the same sprite, the arms kind of look like they're at the wrong perspective. I can see what you were going for, which I think is having arms parallel to the ground, but, to convey that, I'd make the tips of the gloves more curved to match the perspective and pull her forearms back a little bit.
I have a problem with the broken outlines in certain places, but I'm pretty sure it's a personal thing, in my case.
These look pretty good so far, though. Keep it up!