09-19-2015, 03:20 AM
Phase 2 of the walking animation. This shows how many changes I need to make, since I made quite a few fatal errors. Not to mention it was on-hold since frame 8 went missing after a draft of wind from my window spewed the papers into limbo.
I'm also learning how to list mistakes so I don't redo them again.
Frame 9 has 2 major errors:
-Not enough feet contrast, it looks like the foot pauses for a second.
-The left arm becomes a bit short when swaying back to the right whilst returning to frame 1, which looks off.
Frame 5:
-The left arm needs to be a bit lower as it looks sloppy when looping.
Frame 6:
-The right arm needs to poke out less at it looks like it flickers for one frame.
Frame 3:
-Right arm should begin lowering here, as it looks choppy when it moves to frame 4.
Frame 1:
-Right leg is unbent, looks awkward when popping from unbent to bent for a frame.
All frames:
-Head bobbing needs to be toned down.
If anybody else has anything else to criticize upon, please tell me. As I'm enjoying this learning process.
I'm also learning how to list mistakes so I don't redo them again.
Frame 9 has 2 major errors:
-Not enough feet contrast, it looks like the foot pauses for a second.
-The left arm becomes a bit short when swaying back to the right whilst returning to frame 1, which looks off.
Frame 5:
-The left arm needs to be a bit lower as it looks sloppy when looping.
Frame 6:
-The right arm needs to poke out less at it looks like it flickers for one frame.
Frame 3:
-Right arm should begin lowering here, as it looks choppy when it moves to frame 4.
Frame 1:
-Right leg is unbent, looks awkward when popping from unbent to bent for a frame.
All frames:
-Head bobbing needs to be toned down.
If anybody else has anything else to criticize upon, please tell me. As I'm enjoying this learning process.