12-08-2015, 02:37 AM
I'm a bit new to animation myself, so my suggestions may be hit or miss... but I figured I'd give it a shot if means helping someone out.
Comparing each frame to the other I noticed a few things that may (or may not) help you out with the consistency.
Frame 4's hair seems to be a bit too lengthy. Frames 12-14 might share a similar problem, though I'm not fully sure.
Frame 6 might benefit if its head is slightly turned towards the position in frame 7.
Frames 8-10 look a bit off given the angle in Frame 7 and in frame 11.
Frame 14's arm+hand might need to be wider.
Frame 16's left arm+ hand look kind of off. Kind of like the wrist, and maybe even the elbow, are bent and angled weirdly respectively.
I hope that my input can help somewhat, even if not directly.
Comparing each frame to the other I noticed a few things that may (or may not) help you out with the consistency.
Frame 4's hair seems to be a bit too lengthy. Frames 12-14 might share a similar problem, though I'm not fully sure.
Frame 6 might benefit if its head is slightly turned towards the position in frame 7.
Frames 8-10 look a bit off given the angle in Frame 7 and in frame 11.
Frame 14's arm+hand might need to be wider.
Frame 16's left arm+ hand look kind of off. Kind of like the wrist, and maybe even the elbow, are bent and angled weirdly respectively.
I hope that my input can help somewhat, even if not directly.