06-14-2016, 12:44 AM
These look pretty good, only a couple of things I'd like to point out:
Here's a couple of random examples of "good" sheets (basically ones from people who have auto-approval/are staff):
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/79416/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/79613/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/64482/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/psp/ast...eet/78445/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/73145/
Nothing to follow too strictly but just a general idea of the type of sheeting preferred. Yours is still fine if you just fix up the points I mentioned.
- Frames in an animation should be evenly spaced, i.e. bounding boxes should. That makes them easier to animate. It looks fine for the most part, except for in the first animation.
- I'd suggest making the text a bit smaller to reduce redundant space. Not a big issue but saving space is preferable where possible.
- There's an extra line in the top right of the sheet, not sure what's going on there.
Here's a couple of random examples of "good" sheets (basically ones from people who have auto-approval/are staff):
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/79416/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/79613/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/64482/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/psp/ast...eet/78445/
http://www.spriters-resource.com/pc_comp...eet/73145/
Nothing to follow too strictly but just a general idea of the type of sheeting preferred. Yours is still fine if you just fix up the points I mentioned.