06-30-2016, 08:44 AM
Really? There's so much jaggedness and loose pixels. Even if you didn't rotate them, they're still very sloppy.
Making his eyes "a little sharper" doesn't get rid of all the ugly compression on the rest of the sprite. And all it looks like you changed was adding a couple solid blocks of red while drawing a couple lines above the eyes.
Your problem, aside from leaving the compressed reference image in the sprite, is that you don't clean up your lines. They're jagged and there's loose bits here and there that tell me you just went over them with the pencil tool using a mouse. A couple places might have used the fill tool or a thicker brush, but even they don't look thorough.
I'm sorry for being so harsh, but this whole thing is just a mess.
Making his eyes "a little sharper" doesn't get rid of all the ugly compression on the rest of the sprite. And all it looks like you changed was adding a couple solid blocks of red while drawing a couple lines above the eyes.
Your problem, aside from leaving the compressed reference image in the sprite, is that you don't clean up your lines. They're jagged and there's loose bits here and there that tell me you just went over them with the pencil tool using a mouse. A couple places might have used the fill tool or a thicker brush, but even they don't look thorough.
I'm sorry for being so harsh, but this whole thing is just a mess.