10-31-2016, 01:40 PM
"Stick to the topic please."
You're kinda mini-modding your own thread despite the fact that I made the connection between creating original content and this thread very clear.
Anyways, the blue haired girl has banded shading and jagged lines in her hair. On the guy below that, his horn shading is mishapen and jagged, not properly following the shape of the horn.
Also, some of your new palette choices kinda killed some of the contrast, the colours aren't bad, but in cases like the green hat guy near the bottom, the greens aren't very contrasted.
Btw, this isn't to sound rude, but the way you act like you have authority over us like a parent (EX: "you at least tried to say something relevant so that's good") makes you seem like a bit of an ass, whether that's your intention or not. We're just trying to help, I know it's your thread but asserting yourself like can easily come across the wrong way.
You're kinda mini-modding your own thread despite the fact that I made the connection between creating original content and this thread very clear.
Anyways, the blue haired girl has banded shading and jagged lines in her hair. On the guy below that, his horn shading is mishapen and jagged, not properly following the shape of the horn.
Also, some of your new palette choices kinda killed some of the contrast, the colours aren't bad, but in cases like the green hat guy near the bottom, the greens aren't very contrasted.
Btw, this isn't to sound rude, but the way you act like you have authority over us like a parent (EX: "you at least tried to say something relevant so that's good") makes you seem like a bit of an ass, whether that's your intention or not. We're just trying to help, I know it's your thread but asserting yourself like can easily come across the wrong way.
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