You have a few flat areas and surfaces which can be rounded in the outline. These are ok when drawing something actually straight, but you want to avoid them on something like faces. Mario and Luigi are ok in this respect, just the others need looking at. The particular offenders are Ness (bottom and right side of face) and that Fire Emblem guy (Marth? top of hair, bottom of face and right side of face).
It's been said above but your colour selection needs work. Some are ok, while on others you can't tell the difference between different shades. Make a palette of colours before you start actually colouring, so you can see if there is enough contrast or not early on. This can be fixed later of course.
You're in a good place, so keep at it!
It's been said above but your colour selection needs work. Some are ok, while on others you can't tell the difference between different shades. Make a palette of colours before you start actually colouring, so you can see if there is enough contrast or not early on. This can be fixed later of course.
You're in a good place, so keep at it!