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Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels
I have a small series of crits if you don't mind.

If that's a front sprite I'd like to see the tendrils/anthers(?) of the other arm showing, else it makes it look very one-sided when the concept is not meant to be. The head needs work -- firstly I'm not sure if that dark green and yellow mask works, but most importantly you've defined white eyes but they are completely invisible in the normal sized sprite. Experiment with dark pixels around the eyes to remedy that.

The bottom half is excellent, but I expect the green leaves would show between the other pink petal frills at this angle.

The sprite overall feels off balanced, so maybe straighten it up, or have it lean forward rather than back.

You are going for the later 2D pokemon style evidently, so don't be afraid to use more black outlining opposite the light source. Your sprite is about 50/50 light/dark outlines, while the pokemon sprite style usually involves 25/75 light/dark outlines.
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Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-07-2014, 09:40 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 02-21-2015, 08:10 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 02-21-2015, 08:31 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-02-2015, 03:03 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Level 1 - 03-03-2015, 12:18 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-03-2015, 05:57 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-05-2015, 05:11 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-07-2015, 07:06 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-08-2015, 07:50 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-09-2015, 03:59 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-15-2015, 08:41 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-15-2015, 05:30 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 03-16-2015, 07:07 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-17-2015, 08:34 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 03-17-2015, 09:20 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-17-2015, 12:18 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Sketchasaurus - 03-18-2015, 12:59 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-18-2015, 10:34 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Sketchasaurus - 03-18-2015, 12:12 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-18-2015, 03:31 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 03-18-2015, 04:19 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Sketchasaurus - 03-18-2015, 05:08 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-18-2015, 05:26 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kosheh - 03-18-2015, 05:50 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Sketchasaurus - 03-18-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-19-2015, 08:53 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Sketchasaurus - 03-19-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Gors - 03-19-2015, 02:32 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 03-20-2015, 12:08 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-20-2015, 04:02 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-23-2015, 01:42 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 03-26-2015, 12:22 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-26-2015, 04:37 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 03-26-2015, 07:02 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-29-2015, 11:04 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-31-2015, 09:17 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-06-2015, 08:12 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by TheShyGuy - 04-06-2015, 12:57 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-07-2015, 02:13 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by ~Axis~ - 04-07-2015, 02:19 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-07-2015, 04:11 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-12-2015, 06:45 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Rederik_Wood - 04-21-2015, 11:56 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-22-2015, 08:44 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Rederik_Wood - 04-22-2015, 09:44 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-23-2015, 08:32 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Rederik_Wood - 04-24-2015, 09:25 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 05-11-2015, 08:51 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 05-13-2015, 04:54 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by kidicarus29 - 05-13-2015, 05:30 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 05-14-2015, 03:52 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by kidicarus29 - 05-14-2015, 09:34 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by TheShyGuy - 05-14-2015, 06:26 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by E-Man - 05-15-2015, 06:06 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 05-19-2015, 08:07 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-15-2015, 08:19 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Gors - 07-16-2015, 07:25 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-24-2015, 08:53 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by MotorRoach - 07-24-2015, 09:38 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-26-2015, 04:14 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Neslug - 07-26-2015, 05:40 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Gors - 07-27-2015, 07:23 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-27-2015, 08:51 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Gors - 07-27-2015, 01:38 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Filler - 07-27-2015, 04:47 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 07-27-2015, 11:06 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by The KKM - 08-03-2015, 08:10 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-23-2016, 06:25 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Hiynastrike - 03-24-2016, 10:23 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-25-2016, 10:46 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 03-25-2016, 01:56 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 06-26-2016, 05:35 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-03-2016, 10:07 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Jaharl - 07-03-2016, 10:15 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 07-04-2016, 08:35 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Jaharl - 07-04-2016, 11:40 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Gors - 07-05-2016, 07:40 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 08-24-2016, 03:33 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 01-17-2017, 06:16 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 01-17-2017, 09:17 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 01-19-2017, 05:02 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Silversea - 01-19-2017, 07:24 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 10-01-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 10-17-2017, 05:47 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Solid_Spy - 10-19-2017, 10:09 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 11-06-2017, 09:55 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 12-24-2017, 11:32 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 01-08-2018, 03:32 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 01-20-2018, 07:03 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 02-01-2018, 09:04 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Shade - 02-01-2018, 12:36 PM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Gors - 02-08-2018, 06:03 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Aquarius - 03-12-2018, 12:50 AM
RE: Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels - by Kelvin - 04-10-2018, 10:09 AM

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