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Need Some Harsh Jerks to Crit My Stuff!
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Megaman's limbs are twinning pretty hard. Is it supposed to be a kind of idle stance? I guess he is a robot, but I feel like making the pose more contrapposto might make his animation look a bit more relaxed/natural.

There's some minor twinning going on with the birthday girl as well. Her toes also come to a point at a right angle, and I think that is contributing to them looking rather flat. 

Perhaps upping the contrast of the sunset in the bg of the astronaut would make it stand out a bit more, I didn't really notice it until I zoomed in real close. I would also make the red of the petals a bit more saturated as to make them stand out more. I also wonder if making another petal or two still be falling in midair might add to the rhythm of the piece.
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RE: Need Some Harsh Jerks to Crit My Stuff! - by Koala - 01-23-2017, 01:24 AM

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