2017 Work/Critque Thread

[Lexou Duck]

as guy said - i love the design of that ref of yours

but again, i have an edit to present



for the folds, you're gonna wanna make few of them in pixelart, but really follow the seams of the fabric and it should look ok
(besides something as thick as a leather jacket doesn't usually have loads of folds)

i added a bit of outlining to the eyes, it makes em more readible at 1x res i feel

I made the back arm longer, and folded it more, to suit the pose better

and for the legs, i get what you were trying to go for
although i think a pose like that, with feet facing together, is somewhat unbalanced - or at least somewhat feminine, it doesn't suit the character well.
so without changing too much, i tried to make the knees more visible and turned the right foot