2017 Work/Critque Thread

[Guy]

Thanks for the CC I kinda used a bit of both of your recommendations. Changed the face up slightly too

Also for the other character I was wondering if a more cartoony big head looks better to match the style I've been going for.

Also working on another Berserk pixel art, it's Femto doing in a devil's reverse pose (m bison). And like the manga I'm going to update this one slowly...

I'll get the whole pose done then work on shading.

The smaller head works better, has a more aesthetic appeal brother, the rough for Femto is VERY rough, it looks like he has about half the amount of back he should have as well as the furthest leg being offset too much to the right, like a dislocated knee.

I agree with x0, in that the elites face is very hard to read, my eyesights starting to go lately but while i can see the first 3 fine, the 4th (elite) looks a bit jumbled in the face area.


Your palettes are awesome, and feel like something from an early Snes/Sega game, I don't critique much but I love seeing artist with real talent looking to get better, I hope you post at least once or twice more, keep it up!