03-21-2017, 11:43 AM
What are these? Some kind of Furbies? Anyway, on the large one when it spins its head the peach of its chest shouldn't be visible when its facing the backside. You also elected to simply stretch the peach out in the direction of its head instead of actually shifting it left or right. It looks like it's warping as a result. He could use a bit of shading like the small ones.
I would also make your credits message a little smaller. Its better if its just a small image in the corner. It doesn't need to be larger than the sheet itself.
I would also make your credits message a little smaller. Its better if its just a small image in the corner. It doesn't need to be larger than the sheet itself.