04-09-2017, 03:25 PM
The first one, I'm thinking of two reasons: 1) the black is not shaded. Would probably help. 2) The credit logo is way too big. Its about 1/3 of the sheet.
The Second one is way too small. Maybe good enough for a game, but not really impressive enough to put up.
The Third one I'm guessing all that wasted space.
The 4th one the face kind of looks weird to me. Maybe the shading. Maybe the lack of a nose.
The 5th and 6th one, outside of edits, kind of look weird. His right leg looks more like a stump.
The last one I guess is Atari style? Either way, also too small. Maybe make more characters that style would help.
The Second one is way too small. Maybe good enough for a game, but not really impressive enough to put up.
The Third one I'm guessing all that wasted space.
The 4th one the face kind of looks weird to me. Maybe the shading. Maybe the lack of a nose.
The 5th and 6th one, outside of edits, kind of look weird. His right leg looks more like a stump.
The last one I guess is Atari style? Either way, also too small. Maybe make more characters that style would help.
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