first off, you've got some pretty good advice from these guys
secondly, just kinda draw whatever so you can get comfortable with drawing. if you're drawing as a hobby, it's more important to have fun than it is to dwell on how your art isn't artgerm's. somebody like that's literally been drawing all their life and subjected themselves to a harsh regimen, with an intent to go into graphic arts. regardless, this still beats the pants off your old work, but you've still gotta
learn
yeah. just draw, because this front-profile doesn't really tell us much about what you need to improve. this is like drawing a circle and asking us if you drew it correctly.
signed, a guy who spooked himself out of drawing after seeing how much better everybody else was
secondly, just kinda draw whatever so you can get comfortable with drawing. if you're drawing as a hobby, it's more important to have fun than it is to dwell on how your art isn't artgerm's. somebody like that's literally been drawing all their life and subjected themselves to a harsh regimen, with an intent to go into graphic arts. regardless, this still beats the pants off your old work, but you've still gotta
learn
yeah. just draw, because this front-profile doesn't really tell us much about what you need to improve. this is like drawing a circle and asking us if you drew it correctly.
signed, a guy who spooked himself out of drawing after seeing how much better everybody else was