Sheets got rejected. Help!

[AkumaTh]

Your edits do look pretty good. But if I have to think of one reason, its that despite how good they look, it looks like Frisk is cosplaying them. More editing is required to make it seem like the characters are in the Undertale style. I did one for a comic I was making.



Mine is a pixel skinnier, but it does make it seem more like Madotsuki than Frisk. If done better, it could actually look like it would fit in Undertale.