01-27-2009, 03:10 PM
the character and giant sperm both such ass and are way too simplistic and boring
really the only thing that makes the piece decent is the ground tiles. the clouds just look like giant mountains, despite using such bright colors, you're still using way too many on the background, cut that shit out and stick to 3 or 4 shades with little contrast to keep it from having that "i'm dex and i will draw my mountains like clouds and my clouds like rocks and/or ice cream" feeling that everything of yours has had recently
really the only thing that makes the piece decent is the ground tiles. the clouds just look like giant mountains, despite using such bright colors, you're still using way too many on the background, cut that shit out and stick to 3 or 4 shades with little contrast to keep it from having that "i'm dex and i will draw my mountains like clouds and my clouds like rocks and/or ice cream" feeling that everything of yours has had recently