06-04-2008, 12:37 AM
the lineart is jagged and the colors (mainly the darkest ones) needs more contrast.
try some hue shift too.
the shading on the beak is also really bad you should use some AA on it.
try some hue shift too.
the shading on the beak is also really bad you should use some AA on it.
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