08-23-2020, 09:33 PM
I love the first one, it feels so retro and the colour choices are amazing.
If i were to offer any advice it would be to ease up on the dithering a little. Your Mario shows you dont need to dither so much and you can still get smooth results, and it helps the texturing on the pipe pop a little, as opposed to the "My sprint arrested" piece which is pretty much all dithering. Its a nit pick more than an issue, personal taste and all.
Also i can't tell if its because of style or not but your facial anatomy seems a little squarish?
I can try to elaborate further if needed
If i were to offer any advice it would be to ease up on the dithering a little. Your Mario shows you dont need to dither so much and you can still get smooth results, and it helps the texturing on the pipe pop a little, as opposed to the "My sprint arrested" piece which is pretty much all dithering. Its a nit pick more than an issue, personal taste and all.
Also i can't tell if its because of style or not but your facial anatomy seems a little squarish?
I can try to elaborate further if needed