07-03-2023, 01:06 AM
(06-30-2023, 08:34 PM)Shade Wrote: Hey, ilovescratchcie! Wanted to give you some feedback on your sprites here.
I'll start off by saying that he doesn't look much like an elephant and takes more after a rat in the face. This is due to the trunk not having much form and the ears being pretty unreadable. Try giving the trunk a more curved shape. Reference the official model more closely and key in on the shapes that are present and think about how you can convey that in a 2D space. The hat is also blending in with the head, which I'm fairly certain it's not supposed to do.
I'd also suggest revisiting your linework on the body as it looks a little blocky. Feel free to make the body even chubbier but smooth out those edges a bit.
I think this is a good start! Reply if you have any concerns. : >