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I've got a few suggestions on this guy. I did a redo to help illustrate some of my points.
  • You need to keep the outline's contrast consistent with each other. Blue has a dark outline, Orange has a middle ground, and white has no contrast between the colors chosen. 
  • The eyes are cute, but they don't reflect the character (I THINK, this is the penguin from Donkey Kong right?)
  • Flipping the foot like that works in some 8bit abstraction, but I think changing the perspective of the foot will give more depth to the piece.
  • Lastly, pic a light source direction and stick with it. Some of your sprite looks shading from top-right and other parts it feels more directly above.
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Rejected Submissions - by christopherparaujo89 - 12-06-2024, 04:12 PM
RE: Rejected Submissions - by Ton - 12-07-2024, 10:59 AM
RE: Rejected Submissions - by Ton - 12-09-2024, 08:50 AM
RE: Rejected Submissions - by Ton - 12-10-2024, 03:00 PM
RE: Rejected Submissions - by Ton - 12-18-2024, 12:17 PM
RE: Rejected Submissions - by Ton - 12-18-2024, 02:33 PM
RE: Rejected Submissions - by Izzi - 12-19-2024, 05:43 PM

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