02-07-2009, 05:53 PM
No, that's fine; I'm doing this to improve my writing, so critique is valid.
After I wrote that much, I felt that I could've expended on some points (it's a pretty broad subject after all), but the article - as far as articles on the net go, anyway - already felt kinda long. Maybe I should expand on comercialising freeware games in a different article...
After I wrote that much, I felt that I could've expended on some points (it's a pretty broad subject after all), but the article - as far as articles on the net go, anyway - already felt kinda long. Maybe I should expand on comercialising freeware games in a different article...