Ugh
no
this is not how you do gesture drawing.
or proportions
again, since you apparently utterly ignored me before so you could make an attempt to look SPECIAL, I'm going to say: use reference. Bodies are not proportioned even REMOTELY how you've drawn them, and you apparently have no idea of pose dynamics. People are not made of sticks. Joints move. The spine curves. Hips and shoulders are rarely perfectly parallel.
http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorial_...rial_id=61
http://www.sketchtavern.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=938
http://www.sketchtavern.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=940
http://alexds1.deviantart.com/art/Pose-t...l-72010406
Read all of these. Read them thoroughly. Several times.
Generally I'm much nicer and more thorough with my criticisms but tbh you're fucking insufferable and if you can't be bothered to drop the OMG SO ZANY.... i'm so RANDOM act I don't see why I should bother to give you properly thought out criticisms when there's these resources out there.
no
this is not how you do gesture drawing.
or proportions
again, since you apparently utterly ignored me before so you could make an attempt to look SPECIAL, I'm going to say: use reference. Bodies are not proportioned even REMOTELY how you've drawn them, and you apparently have no idea of pose dynamics. People are not made of sticks. Joints move. The spine curves. Hips and shoulders are rarely perfectly parallel.
http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorial_...rial_id=61
http://www.sketchtavern.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=938
http://www.sketchtavern.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=940
http://alexds1.deviantart.com/art/Pose-t...l-72010406
Read all of these. Read them thoroughly. Several times.
Generally I'm much nicer and more thorough with my criticisms but tbh you're fucking insufferable and if you can't be bothered to drop the OMG SO ZANY.... i'm so RANDOM act I don't see why I should bother to give you properly thought out criticisms when there's these resources out there.