02-21-2009, 05:25 PM
Constructive criticism for SSBS's Sonic:
-Run animation doesn't look like it would animate very well. Same applies to most of the animations.
-The Quills on the falling animation look weird. Specifically, the lineart and the shading.
-Spinballs should be rounder and shaded more like Sonic.
-The shields look fine for placeholders, but otherwise they look horribly resized.
-In most of the animations, it looks like you just copied the head from the base sprite and edited it, which, didn't seem to always come out right.
Tip: Try animating some of these so that we can see better what they look like. Also, don't take anything I said rudely.
@Spoder, yeah, I think you should make him lean forward more. Looking good, though!
And I like Ton's idea for a subforum.
-Run animation doesn't look like it would animate very well. Same applies to most of the animations.
-The Quills on the falling animation look weird. Specifically, the lineart and the shading.
-Spinballs should be rounder and shaded more like Sonic.
-The shields look fine for placeholders, but otherwise they look horribly resized.
-In most of the animations, it looks like you just copied the head from the base sprite and edited it, which, didn't seem to always come out right.
Tip: Try animating some of these so that we can see better what they look like. Also, don't take anything I said rudely.
@Spoder, yeah, I think you should make him lean forward more. Looking good, though!
And I like Ton's idea for a subforum.