Paper Toy

[lone wolf-rayet star]

hope that helps

It looks like when you were making him you were only thinking in one direction. You have to look at each of the sides individually.
Like
When you're working on the side of the face, for example, you should really be thinking of it as the side of the face, not just a bit that's next to the face. Of course it has to connect well to the other bits, but yeah. idk, i can't explain it that well cause i suck

Anyway. There's a shitload of things wrong with your Mario. As Grooveman said, the hat is wrong. You should be able to see the entire front of the hat on the face square. The top square should have a bird's eye (from above) view of the hat. Listen to Rakia as well. The straps + buttons should be on the body, not under the face. That's pretty much the bottom of the chin. There should just be skin there. His ears should be closer to the middle. They don't have to be right in the center, but you don't want them right next to his face. His hair shouldn't cover his entire face. Some skin should be visible too. The face square doesn't need the red to shape his face. It should just be his skin color.

and yeah

The style you drew it in is pretty terrible lookin'.