Super Star Ultra Project - Phase 2

[Geo the Fox]

Update:

Okay, I am going to be real rude right now cause I'm tired, grumpy, somewhat annoyed, and cause Tornado is one of my favorite abilities.

Are you fucking kidding me?

All you did was take one god damn tornado animation and paste it upon Kirby's head in an ugly fashion.

I'll repeat what I said last time. His hat is fucking huge now. I'll tell you how to fix that while telling you how to make this sheet look like not-crap.

First off, Kirby's tornado hat does NOT take the vague shape of a cone. So you can't simply make one animation of a tornado and paste it on every fucking pose, and call that work. Go look at KNiD, KatAM, and KSqSq--even HAL wasn't that lazy. And they're pretty fucking lazy.

Kirby's tornado hat takes on a cylindrical shape that has a certain upward angle to it. I should NOT be able to peer inside of the tornado in any of Kirby's poses that does not have his head facing toward the screen.

Continuing on the shape of the Tornado, it's a cylinder. Like putting part of a tube ontop of Kirby''s head. THe bottom of it fits around the top of his head, staying within the boundary of the circlet, and the rest of it should suggest slight straightness. What you have there is the normal cone-shape of a tornado. Why is that? It's because you just fucking pasted the same tornado over and over. Oh, and the size? It shouldn't be bigger than Kirby's body. The round part of his body without his shoes.

Just as the angle of Kirbys head and ... circlet hat tilts as his body moves, so does the tornado. In fact, there are very few poses where the tornado frames get reused for any of Kirby's poses. That means, you should be remaking the tornado to match the angles Kirby's head tilts it. This also does NOT justify skewing that one tornado animation you have for the sliding pose. Also try again on that transformation pose. It looks HORRIBLE. Please, use a REFERENCE for this sheet.

Since I'm basically obligated to point out one good part of the sheet, I will go ahead and say that even though you tried, and failed, to milk it for all its worth, that tornado is indeed impressive. I'm almost curious as to how you made it, since it's so good. Thing is, the only thing it's actually useable for is the tornado attack. Stop trying to reuse it, it won't work.

That is all. Rage.

EDIT: OK, i lied. The circlets you made are good too. Keep it up. ^o^b