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Akedo
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I'm going to give real C+C.
So here:
Tell me if I'm doing it right.
The amazing trio:
First guy:
Contrast is awesome.
Hair is well detailed and follows the head and falls with gravity.

Second guy:
Contrast is awesome.
You should change the background cause I really want to see how the hair looks.
Maybe a Magenta will work.

Third guy:
Contrast is awesome.
I like him but the only problem I can get from him is that the lines of the face(texture lines) don't look right to me it looks a bit puppety but maybe it's just me.
I have a question, In the bottom of the head is that a beard?
If it's a beard then it doesn't connect to the hair which should cause unless he shaves that part and leaves the bead hanging from the right side then don't bother fixing it.
If not then please make it less dark cause it gives the impression that is a beard.

The punching animation:
Fluent animation.
If your going to use that as a base I might as well say that it's going to look awesome.

Beautiful Village Area:
I completely loved it.
The only thing that I see wrong with it is that it needs a background.LOL
No but really it's plain awesome.
It's well put together
The tiles are completely awesome I can't seem to find where one starts and when it ends.

So how did I do?
~~LOVE~~
~~SOLINK~~PK~~C2B~~KAIKIMI~~
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Akedo - by mozzy - 03-14-2009, 05:42 PM
RE: Akedo - by Tero - 03-14-2009, 05:44 PM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-14-2009, 05:53 PM
RE: Akedo - by EdpR - 03-14-2009, 05:56 PM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-14-2009, 05:59 PM
RE: Akedo - by Adam - 03-14-2009, 07:21 PM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-14-2009, 07:25 PM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-14-2009, 07:29 PM
RE: Akedo - by Adam - 03-14-2009, 07:33 PM
RE: Akedo - by Koopaul - 03-14-2009, 07:34 PM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-14-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-14-2009, 07:36 PM
RE: Akedo - by nairenu - 03-14-2009, 07:43 PM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-14-2009, 07:52 PM
RE: Akedo - by Goemar - 03-14-2009, 07:53 PM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-14-2009, 08:06 PM
RE: Akedo - by nairenu - 03-14-2009, 08:14 PM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-14-2009, 10:33 PM
RE: Akedo - by tsr moderation staff - 03-14-2009, 10:37 PM
RE: Akedo - by Goemar - 03-15-2009, 07:43 AM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-15-2009, 08:43 AM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-15-2009, 08:51 AM
RE: Akedo - by BobbyLala - 03-15-2009, 08:59 AM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-15-2009, 09:50 AM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-15-2009, 09:54 AM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-15-2009, 09:56 AM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-15-2009, 10:44 AM
RE: Akedo - by Goemar - 03-15-2009, 11:33 AM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-15-2009, 11:44 AM
RE: Akedo - by Goemar - 03-15-2009, 11:47 AM
RE: Akedo - by Shawn - 03-15-2009, 11:52 AM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-15-2009, 11:52 AM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-15-2009, 11:57 AM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-15-2009, 12:03 PM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-15-2009, 12:14 PM
RE: Akedo - by Goemar - 03-15-2009, 12:33 PM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-15-2009, 01:52 PM
RE: Akedo - by mozzy - 03-16-2009, 08:18 AM
RE: Akedo - by Mabelma - 03-16-2009, 10:33 AM

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