03-19-2009, 06:01 PM
She's leaning too much to the left, and seems a bit-off balance, as her feet seem too near each other (especially the left foot). I would make the cannon part more like a cannon rather than the metallic part of a paintbrush.
You could go for a chestplate reminiscent of Amaterasu's head.
You could go for a chestplate reminiscent of Amaterasu's head.