Minion Madness {Comic Series}

[Maxpphire]

You should try making the panels more interesting and not have them all look the same. Other then that it isn't bad. The plot line is kinda all over the place and full of holes so I would suggest adding more comics to explain things happening behind the protagonists backs to make it seem more fuller. As in you should have had a comic that had a spy for Bowser spying on them then told Bowser about their plan. The scene change between 15 and 16 seems to have gone a bit fast. In my opinion it probably would have worked better if you left them were they fought and have some shyguys come in or have them take a picture of the fallen general or have them tie the general up and drag him around the shyguy kingdom.