04-12-2009, 03:08 PM
You need to fix everything.
i'm pretty sure he shouldn't be that jaggy. You should really smooth those lines out. Really, i don't understand how people can have such problems making ellipses. It isn't that hard. You know how an ellipse looks like, it's a simple basic shape.
The same goes for the shading, it's way too jaggy. Furthermore, it could use more contrast.
i'm pretty sure he shouldn't be that jaggy. You should really smooth those lines out. Really, i don't understand how people can have such problems making ellipses. It isn't that hard. You know how an ellipse looks like, it's a simple basic shape.
The same goes for the shading, it's way too jaggy. Furthermore, it could use more contrast.