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Hey. I don't have much time to chat, but here's an edit:

[Image: spartanj.png]

In this post I'm trying to show you:

-hue shifting
-pose
-AA
-balance
-form

I completely resprited this. I didn't edit yours, so my suggestion for you is to resprite yours again as well. Try to make the pose make sense. Try to make volumes accurate. Try to give him more human proportions.

I hope my edit helps!

-Dex
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Working on Improvement - by King of Bad Posters - 04-14-2009, 05:18 PM
RE: Working on Improvement - by Chdonga - 04-15-2009, 12:35 PM
RE: Working on Improvement - by Adam - 04-15-2009, 12:41 PM
RE: Working on Improvement - by Alpha Six - 04-15-2009, 03:52 PM
RE: Working on Improvement - by Solstice - 04-15-2009, 09:47 PM
RE: Working on Improvement - by Lemon - 04-18-2009, 05:13 AM

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