06-16-2008, 05:18 PM
okay, now I'm getting some really usefull critism, no offence to earlier GrooveMan.Exe, I will try to make my writing better, I think the style does improve over the length of the story, but that might be me just being biast. Anyways, all I can say is that MY writing is different from Sami's and that when you read in perspective of Xalex, you'll find different views, and different writing styles