06-16-2008, 07:57 PM
mors ontologica Wrote:I also meant to say that you should never ever put asterisks in instad of the word when swearing. I know you're just trying not to offend, but if you're going to do it, just post a warning before the beginning, so if people are going to be offended they can just miss out, and it's their loss. : P
lol, okay, I'll try to keep that in mind : P
I would also kind of like to recieve critism and input on the plot of the story so far, I admire the look on my writing skills, but I would also apreciate if you guys would comment on the plot device