Custom Luxray and probopass sprites

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Thes are my first three custom sprite sheets of Luxray and Probopass from the Pokemon series.
C:\Users\Turners\Pictures\Dans Pics\Probopass Sprite sheet.bmp
C:\Users\Turners\Pictures\Dans Pics\Luxray sprites.png

(Also, can someone please re-size Luxray for me please?)

[Ton]

Hey Dan, you have to use imageshack.us to upload images.

[Rhyme]

Thes are my first three custom sprite sheets of Luxray and Probopass from the Pokemon series.
C:\Users\Turners\Pictures\Dans Pics\Probopass Sprite sheet.bmp
C:\Users\Turners\Pictures\Dans Pics\Luxray sprites.png

(Also, can someone please re-size Luxray for me please?)

i'm going to lol if the probopass is the avatar he's using <_<;;

[Ultimecia]

To upload a sprite, use a image hosting site, like http://www.imageshack.us or http://www.photobucket.com. Then copy the direct link and paste here. If you want to do even better, use the image tags

Code:

[img]your-link-here[/img]

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ok, got them;
Probopass =
Luxray =

again, can someone please re-size Luxray please?

[Kairos]

Yeah these are no where near submission ready.


I really not even sure how to crit this.

I'm how trying to think about how to fix this but it is honestly so bad I can't think of a way.

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Im only fairly new to spriting, and I cant improve this unless I know how

[Ton]

I'm glad you're open to critique. most people get defensive. My first point of advice would be to focus on the lineart. Have a picture open of what you're spriting so you can look at it as a reference. That will help you with shapes. I'm going to move this topic to Sprite Discussion for now so you can get some critiques and comments.

[Cobalt Blue]

try to, forst get your sprite closer to what the original looks.

this is by no means a sugestion to EDIT the original sprite.

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ok, thanks guys