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Better, but I was thinking more like this:
I think I made a couple other little edits as I went, but rounded mouth and proportions of the legs/feet were the main things I changed. I moved the head down one pixel as well.
The cheeks on the back poses are really angular and flat, so maybe change that too.
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Yeah, Yoshi's done.
Captain Falcon has a bunch of things to fix, but I need to go to bed now and can't post till tomorrow evening, but I'll give some crits then.
And WOW. That is some monumental progress right there. How long has it been since then? I also find it funny that you've been doing this Smash RPG sprite thing since all that time ago. THAT is dedication to a project.
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his helmet should be rounder
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(04-18-2010, 11:18 AM)Solink Wrote: his helmet should be rounder
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I don't see anything else that needs work :]
I guess you can work on the next character