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04-09-2010, 04:58 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-09-2010, 05:46 AM by Oskarmandude.)
Shadow's my favorite character, so I decided to make a sprite sheet of him, Here ya go
Watcha think?
EDIT: I made the thumb
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Shadow's jet shoes don't work like that. Try a more 'rollerskater' style of animation. Speaking of which; I think you're missing quite a few animation frames, too.
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Also, I think he look too happy to be Shadow.
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04-09-2010, 09:00 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-09-2010, 09:13 AM by Iceman404.)
His top spike should point downward, and it looks like his shoes were merely painted. Nearly all his frames are gone. Shadow NEVER uses peel-out.
You may need to restart the whole thing, and let us help/guide you with it through.
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Not to mention that shadow's shoes aren't pointy like sonic's and instead look a bit closer to "real" shoes.
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It's almost a recolor of various Genesis and Sega Cd rips, actually.
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its the 9999999th sprite edit of shadow. and its far from being decent.
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04-10-2010, 11:10 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-10-2010, 11:12 PM by Oskarmandude.)
Comon guys, this is one of my earliest sonic sprites, anyways, these are my sprites, I can do anything I want with them.
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Then show the latest ones if they are that much better. Also, why are you submitting this here when your tag says it's only allowed to be archived SOMEWHERE ELSE? Just sayin'.
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04-10-2010, 11:15 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-10-2010, 11:17 PM by Iceman404.)
(04-10-2010, 11:10 PM)Oskarmandude Wrote: these are my sprites, I can do anything I want with them. You can also ask for a lock too, just by saying that. =P
Anyways were just giving some crits, you know, C+C to help you fix up your sprite? (People always use the "first time" thing...)
If you won't accept criticism, and just "do what you want with them" your not going to get anywhere with them at all.
EDIT: Not to be mean but, after reading the credit tags: How did this get by so many people and come out like this?
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(04-09-2010, 01:18 PM)Francisco Cifuentes Wrote: its the 9999999th sprite edit of shadow. and its horrible
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(04-10-2010, 11:10 PM)Oskarmandude Wrote: Comon guys, this is one of my earliest sonic sprites, anyways, these are my sprites, I can do anything I want with them.
...you specifically asked "Whatcha Think" and we told you what was wrong with them.
Obviously if you ask for our opinion, we're going to tell you if something is wrong.
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Ugh.. This is why i hate the sonic fans toda--
I mean, Dude, were you expecting to be praised with this recolor?
By the looks of it, it never was gonna get it in the first place. okay, I know I don't know that
much about spriting yet, but still I know when you're taking in the criticism as a personal insult.
don't get offended by this, take their advice and show em' you can do better. You can even do it in
a mocking matter too. Well, I hoped this little rant helped a little, and remember dude,
you'll never get better if everyone says your awesome.
(and sorry if im backseating mod i just wanted to get this out there)
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(04-11-2010, 01:22 AM)Francisco Cifuentes Wrote: (04-09-2010, 01:18 PM)Francisco Cifuentes Wrote: its the 9999999th sprite edit of shadow. and its horrible
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This is.... horrible. No offense but it's a recolor, which is the worst kind of sprites. I mean, it's almost effortless to make them and you still failed. And you can't accept criticism. And stop posting recolors on your deviantart because it's not even real artwork.
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