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Jin from LOST in the Fire Emblem style (with palette gratuitously ripped from FE8.) It's "done", but something feels off so any crit is appreciated. Reference
here.
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Mockup for the weekly challenge on PJ. There is a very slim chance that I will actually get it done on time due to finals but I really wanted to give it a try. The light rays are giving me the most difficulty, mainly because I realized that I have no idea how to deal with them.
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these rays need to be as subtle as posible, and fade as they geet deeper into the ocean. a good dose of AA would be good also.
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That Jin is pretty beautiful

May be a little too manly-muscly though?
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I like the mockup. I have no idea who Jin is, but he's pretty good looking LOL.
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He looks a bit too "white".
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Oh hey an update (finally.)
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Current version of the mockup. The light rays look pretty cartoony, so they might seem out of place? Also made some quick tiles for future use.
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Jin with some very minor touchups and a mini.
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that Jin is actually great
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Amazing again. Do you think you could attempy a Daniel maybe? He's my favorite character
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He's one my to do list.