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Time to re-learn how to sprite. I noticed people are really doing hard-on crits on pixel work I want to get some in on that. Especially with the sprite mods and all that.
I want to get the pixel-groove back. The only real finished on is Finn, so I'll listen in a fix him up and finish the rest based on whatever I do to Finn.
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#2
Overti- Oh wait, wrong one.

On Finn, I think you should probably put in a bit more contrast between his... hat?... and his face. Right now, they blend together a bit much.
Otherwise, I can't think of any other crits for it, but it still looks like it could use just a bit more work.

The girl thing looks okay so far. I'm not sure if you want AA in it, but I don't see anything wrong with it.
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OMG NIN
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#4
His right legs seems a bit off to me. His left seems to follow the way his shorts goes before turning, but on his right it seems to go horizontal and not follow his shorts.
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