08-10-2010, 08:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-10-2010, 08:22 PM by Kitsu.)
Overti- Oh wait, wrong one.
On Finn, I think you should probably put in a bit more contrast between his... hat?... and his face. Right now, they blend together a bit much.
Otherwise, I can't think of any other crits for it, but it still looks like it could use just a bit more work.
The girl thing looks okay so far. I'm not sure if you want AA in it, but I don't see anything wrong with it.
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His right legs seems a bit off to me. His left seems to follow the way his shorts goes before turning, but on his right it seems to go horizontal and not follow his shorts.